FORTY WINKS


O’ stars of night let me sleep

a slumber one but very deep

don’t glare on my shadow and weep

My dreams shall be mine, dare if you keep

let your dreams come and make u glow

when memories of the past will flow

like an ocean in the dusk moves slow

then the bank of mine eyes will show

the depth of that smouldering pain

which I was feeling in the vain

let all the sorrows in my world slain

O’ my moon help me refrain

From the fire of life’s gun

This will burn me if I wouldn’t run

Now my odyssey has begun

Wake me up at the call of the sun

PS: It is written from the given lines of my dear friend Divineta. dedicated to her!~!

11 comments:

curve November 1, 2009 at 8:33 AM  

I am really impressed hasan:) i like the way u represent and express feelings. keep it up:)

Anonymous November 3, 2009 at 9:24 AM  

REally liked it.. thanks

Anonymous November 5, 2009 at 11:43 PM  

Nice one!

Vijeya November 18, 2009 at 11:31 AM  

hi there....lemme tell ya sumthin dat ur lucidity as a writer is amazing n i found dat u visted my bolg only minutes ago..reason fr discovering ur presence dis late is coz i myself quit writing fr some unfathomable reasons ! bt was more than glad to find a fellow blogger (who by all means is far more acomplisehd in thought and words )visiting my humble writing! do keep take a sneak peek into my work as well!! al the best Mr. Rizivi .... by da way ...GUD one !! :)

Unknown December 4, 2009 at 9:39 AM  

Your poems are good. love to read more often.. keep posting

Unknown February 16, 2010 at 4:40 AM  

beautiful.....ur poems hv a deep insane touch.keep d gud wrk!!!!!!!

Unknown February 16, 2010 at 4:57 AM  

hey srry 4 d previous. 1...i meant instil n nt insane...srry!
bt truly ur poems r fabulous!.....

Hasan Zia February 21, 2010 at 6:38 AM  

Thanks a lot everyone.
it's ok saima.

Sri Valli November 11, 2010 at 1:50 AM  

Nice one!

hina mahdi September 14, 2012 at 1:19 AM  

wow lovely poem!!!
really i liked it alot..
best haiji..:)

Hasan Zia September 16, 2012 at 3:16 AM  

@hina
Now it is really best, u read it na :P

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