O’ stars of night let me sleep
a slumber one but very deep
don’t glare on my shadow and weep
My dreams shall be mine, dare if you keep
let your dreams come and make u glow
when memories of the past will flow
like an ocean in the dusk moves slow
then the bank of mine eyes will show
the depth of that smouldering pain
which I was feeling in the vain
let all the sorrows in my world slain
O’ my moon help me refrain
From the fire of life’s gun
This will burn me if I wouldn’t run
Now my odyssey has begun
Wake me up at the call of the sun
PS: It is written from the given lines of my dear friend Divineta. dedicated to her!~!
11 comments:
I am really impressed hasan:) i like the way u represent and express feelings. keep it up:)
REally liked it.. thanks
Nice one!
hi there....lemme tell ya sumthin dat ur lucidity as a writer is amazing n i found dat u visted my bolg only minutes ago..reason fr discovering ur presence dis late is coz i myself quit writing fr some unfathomable reasons ! bt was more than glad to find a fellow blogger (who by all means is far more acomplisehd in thought and words )visiting my humble writing! do keep take a sneak peek into my work as well!! al the best Mr. Rizivi .... by da way ...GUD one !! :)
Your poems are good. love to read more often.. keep posting
beautiful.....ur poems hv a deep insane touch.keep d gud wrk!!!!!!!
hey srry 4 d previous. 1...i meant instil n nt insane...srry!
bt truly ur poems r fabulous!.....
Thanks a lot everyone.
it's ok saima.
Nice one!
wow lovely poem!!!
really i liked it alot..
best haiji..:)
@hina
Now it is really best, u read it na :P
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