Miles ahead the life goes on
For myself the deep odds I withdrawn
Frustrated from the mundane
you don't know, am going insane
Your love spined a wound so deep
Why your memories lit in sleep
Now, when everything is all over
But every time when I lay on pullover
The thoughts of only yours come in mind
I don't know how my heart still hopes that I’ll find
My destination of love, that’s you
Indeed, the beautiful were the days of blue
Still not ended that smoldering pain
hold it always or make anguish in vain
'cause the Pure Truth is lowed down 'neath a cage
and you never understood it neither in this stage
When everything seems lie and glitz prevails
Flamboyance is in the air and the true beauty fails
I request, please give my heart back to me
Or I die, please listen to my plea.
A REQUEST OF LOVE
Posted by
Hasan Zia
Saturday, July 24, 2010
27 comments:
nice poem :)
request of love
tht u r d only one
with whom i feel safe
nd wth u i want to spend my life near a lake
good one...i like the last two quatrains the most...Pure Truth with capital P and T is the most clever thing u've done here...i also like the last but one "couplet"...content-wise...
i wish u all the best for the contest....
@sweta Thank u for your sweet comment.
@bhaswati Thankz a lot :)
nice request of love...!
"I request, please give my heart back to me
Or I die, please listen to my plea."
I found dese two lines most touching to my heart..!
All d best fr ur contest.:)
Excellent meaningful poem..!! nice selection of words...really great one..!! best of luck.:)
@saby Thankz!~!
@bushra thank u dear!~!
The poem is beautiful esp liked this: 'I request, please give my heart back to me'.All the best!
Finally here :)
The third stanza is my favorite as I can relate to it..
Another wonderful write-up! Keep up the good work!
@jaspreet Thankz and best of luck to u also!~!
@sarah
Thanks for your encouraging comment.
Wow! What a request for love.. I totally love. Definitely after reading this, anyone in this world would accept you..
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good pic and nice little poem.. :)
Nice poem & I've no words 2 say anything
....hats of to you !!!!!!
a request of love....
nice poem...
in this poem...ek insaan ke jazbaat apne pyar ke liye DIKHTE HAI ...
and these lines are awesome.."The thoughts of only yours come in mind
I don't know how my heart still hopes that I’ll find
My destination of love"
@someone is special thankz n all the to u also.!~!
@sundeep, ghazal
Thank u so much.
@sam
Thank u, hanji jazbaat dekhliye aapne :P
the last two lines..hmmm..so very aptly put
Very well written!
Lovely!
"I don't know how my heart still hopes that I’ll find" - :)
Hope is the only thing you can keep.
excellent read. Loved your post.
When things are wished for with all the heart, and with such a lovely plea in the form of a post, the world is listening to your request :)
Good one
Hello Hasan!
1.I love poetry in general, & your poem has come out well!
2.a b a b format always brings a smile on to my face :)
3.The emotions are so neatly portrayed.
4.Frustrated from the mundane
you don't know, am going insane ~ My favorite line 'cause I can relate to it.
Good stuff! Cheers! :)
@ turbulent mind and @ moonbeam
Thank u for reading!~!
@Tuppence
Thanks a lot for your beautiful words. :)
@raksha
hi and thanks for visiting and reading my post, I'm glad u liked.
oh man! i love this one! one of the best you have written so far Hasan...beautifully etched my friend :)
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Nice poem....Loved the last two lines...:)
Keep writing :)
very nice poem..last 2 lines n 3rd stanza are superb!!!!
@hina
Thanks a lot :)
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