A poem

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A DATE WITH NIGHT

When trees stop blowing wind, when oceans
Stops crying that’s the time we meet
With sweet hellos I greet, and ask-

Why are you so silent and quiet?
Why you have gloomy ambience and no delight
I seem to love you at first sight
Bethink you it’s incredible, quoted night

I want with you a moonlight supper
O’ My goodness you need to suffer
My dear from the restlessness
No it gives me more consciousness

Don’t you have any friend?
Merely one whom God had send
Who made my darkness to shine
The stars my brats from divine

Is none praise your beauty your hue
No fortunately there are a few
But they all are miser creep sobs
Mum’s the word from their gobs

As when they close their eyes
They sometimes dream dawn skies
Although knowing I am there
They do not care to hear
Me, when I lay like nightingale
The shadow, all my endeavors fail

Don’t worry I have made you my true pal
I’ll stand by you wall-to-wall
My dear why don’t you like morn
Sighs of sun stroked penuries make me forlorn

So in such an atmosphere of dove
Give me your hand my love
And make your person content don’t sleep
In the condition that you’ll not weep
I accepted your proposal from my black heart
Hold me dear to caress you apart…..


6 comments:

Unknown June 19, 2009 at 3:59 AM  

My dear why don’t you like morn
Sighs of sun stroked penuries make me forlorn
........
I accepted your proposal from my black heart
Hold me dear to caress you apart…..

i like it very nice !

Unknown June 23, 2009 at 7:59 AM  

its really beautiful....i jus loved it..
really nice..
gud work..

menaka June 23, 2009 at 11:04 AM  

really a good one!

Ravneet Sekhon June 24, 2009 at 3:24 AM  

I accepted your proposal from my black heart
Hold me dear to caress you apart…

hey hi,
why is the heart black here??
heart should be pure right!!??!!

Hasan Zia June 24, 2009 at 4:09 AM  

If u read it carefully then it's a proposal given to the night by the poet.so night is always black. Actually it implies a person is in love with the sorrow and Night symbolizes sorrow n Morning symboliszs happines.

thankz 4 commenting!~!

Miss Komal July 20, 2009 at 9:43 PM  

Oh !
An amazing piece of poetry .
"Is none praise your beauty your hue
No fortunately there are a few
But they all are miser creep sobs
Mum’s the word from their gobs"

So true.


perfect blend of words , to represent the affection for dark/night/solitude .

very well.

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